Gift Exchanges
by Stephen Collis, Gloria Personne, Alfred Noyes + the poetry of Ramon Fernandez
[Gloria Personne on Ramon Fernandez]
The Plebeian Cantos and Hypothetical Poetry
Even
though I am not really a poet myself, my master is—or was—a Spanish
poet who died in 1936 under mysterious circumstances. Even more
remarkable, perhaps, is the fact that this poet is known only to have
published a single, sixteen page poem (or fragment of a longer work).
This
hypothetical larger work, the so-called “Plebeian Cantos,” exists only
in a few fragmentary notes, sketches, and jottings (there are diagrams
too) found amongst Ramon Fernandez’s papers. Mostly destroyed or
presumably lost along with his body (somewhere on the Aragon front of
the Spanish Civil War, late in 1936), these “papers” largely consist of
a single slim notebook with a number of pieces of paper (notes, drafts
of poems, and letters) inserted therein, and given to a fellow Catalan
only days before the poet’s disappearance.
Or,
alternatively, the “Plebeian Cantos” exist complete, whole,
perfect—written by Fernandez and lost and/or destroyed by him; that we
cannot actually read the “Cantos” does not mean that they do not (did
not) exist. They live on as uncertain legends of themselves. They are
the past, now, in its complete and timeless pastness. Perfectly
inaccessible.
I have read the
entire “Cantos” in my imagination. Long nights alone up late devouring
them page after page after page. They are fabulous—like nothing in any
language’s poetry. Selfishly, I will keep them to myself.
Or, as Stephen Collis has notably suggested, the “Quixote Variations,” Fernandez’s only known published poem (Litoral,
November 1920, and recently republished in a new translation by
Bookthug, in Toronto), is a part of, an introduction to, a foyer for,
the “Cantos.” Thus we can indeed read the poem, or at least, its
précis. If we do so, in English, it is best in Alfred Noyes able and
exact translation (Bookthug 2008).
I
say “foyer,” because Fernandez’s work, in conception, is decidedly
architectural, or at least spatial. The “Quixote Variations” were to
provide an entry to the longer work, which would build “up and out from
there” (the notes indicate this much). In the loss or lack of any
detailed notes, Fernandez is not unlike that other great Catalan
architect, Antonio Gaudi—minus the conservative Catholicism. The
“Plebeian Cantos” are his Sagrada Familia, impossible, incantatory, and incomplete.
Nothing
is as dreary as the actualized. The pure potential, the never seen,
only half glimpsed, keeps us forever on our toes, on the look out for
the rest of what we will never catch again. The purely potential places
the future deep in the past, where it continues to reside, awaiting
fulfillment. This is why we should resist the completion of Gaudi’s
building, and Fernandez’s poem: they should remain a hint, a fragment,
a possibility.
What Noyes’s translation gives us is Fernandez’s poem with its incompletion intact (if
that makes sense). Noyes stays close to Fernandez’s distorted syntax
and circular, looping phrasing. If the Spanish poet, in his pure
marginality (we can all aspire to such a true absence), once threw a
stone into a pond and watched its rings circle out and slowly
disappear, Noyes’s gift is that he has managed to step up to the side
of that exact same pond, pick up a stone much like that other stone
thrown some seventy years ago, and has thrown his stone into the exact
same spot that his predecessors fell. Now we watch Noyes’s rock’s rings
repeat the path that Fernandez’s sailed, into a translated oblivion.
I am lucky enough to know Noyes and Collis, and to listen in on their debates about Fernandez. Bookthug’s Quixote Variations, with Noyes’s introduction and Collis’s afterward, give some sense of their contest. As someone who is not a
poet, I have the pleasure of not having to judge, but rather, to enjoy.
We three form a little gift exchange circuit here. I asked Collis for a
poem on Noyes. He responded with one—but also, a poem for me. At the
same time, Noyes presented me a new poem from Fernandez—taken from his
tattered notebook and dated August 1 1936. In return for all these
gifts, I try this little prose. Taken together, these pieces form the
outbuildings of our collective hypothetical poetry. We are plebeians
all, camped on the outskirts of our master Fernandez’s soaring but
unknown (because unknowable) poetry.
[Two Poems by Stephen Collis]
FOR GLORIA PERSONNE
What architecture holds
An eyebrow’s arch
Above no one’s eye?
Is it you who has left
There blue prints
On the beach for the sea to erase?
I walk towards the question of you
Somewhere in a South American city
Unfurling your pencil’s art.
The dome above the abyss is lit
With incendiary ideas:
Is it you trying to coral them one by one?
Nothing is left but being alone.
The planet cools, Gloria,
Ready for you to plumb its unpredictable depths.
IN APPRECIATION OF ALFRED NOYES
I make a pact with you
Alfred Noyes
An argument has its limits
Where a poem thankfully does not.
To have translated yourself
Out of the unknown language
Of another is your true gift
T
o have translated time
Where there was only timelessness
To have translated the space
Another body occupied —
You approach the place I begin To ascertain the outlines of a poem
Neither of us will ever have written.
When we meet again the other side of words
No one will know who translated whom.
[A newly discovered poem by Ramon Fernandez, translated from the Spanish by Alfred Noyes]
THE INTERNAL QUIXOTE
In the wake of change chains
Men made decoy obedience
Difficult to discriminate
A period of throws
The very language of deceit
We were in a novel
Tennis court oaf
The profane skies did compliment the clowns
And polite citizens sentenced themselves
Shackled by arbitrary restraints
Did somebody say pastiche?
The bare parts of a great series
Mind forged mandibles
In some future period (Noble Apostrophe)
The language of romance
Not the cold formality of statutes
I’ll no longer pursue the gaudy ghost
Or (to borrow the language of the world)
Went in the middle of the night and broke the padlocks
Threw open the gates
In the wake of chains change |
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